Editing+the+body+paragraphs

Below are 3 body paragraphs. They contain a few problems such as:


 * **The sentences are not in the correct order. You will have to reorder the sentences so that they are logical**
 * **The sentences need transition words (first, second, after that, etc.)**

__**Directions:-**__

Read the introduction and conclusion, which are correct. Then, in pairs, edit each body paragraph.


 * How to be a good surgeon**

Those who decide to become surgeons have to consider the many extra years of study beyond the bachelor's degree when they will learn the skills of their chosen specialty. Even though medical students spend many years and do a lot of hard work in medical school, they still have a lot to learn. **In order to become successful surgeons, doctors continue to learn in an ongoing process working with patients.**

Now edit the following three body paragraphs.


 * Pair 1**: It is critical that doctors check the general health condition of their patients before surgery. Once nurses and technicians have checked the patients' blood pressure and heart condition and given the necessary blood tests, doctors need to get the patients' past medical records and order any special tests that might be required. After they understand their patients' health condition well, doctors can decide what kind of operation to perform. Otherwise, the operation my be a failure


 * Pair 2**: Operations need to be performed quickly and correctly to be successful. This requires surgeons who are skillful and fast, so good surgeons are those who have practiced over and over to develop skills. Some patients can't stand long periods under anesthesia. For them, operations have to be completed in the shortest time possible. To be good surgeons, doctors have to be extremely skillful so they must practice constantly.


 * Pair 3**: After the operation, some patients may have symptoms that forecast impending danger.Surgeons should continuously examine their patients, and, with the help of monitoring equipment and duty nurses, make diagnoses and give the patients further treatment if necessary. Monitoring the patient after the operation will also help doctors succeed in saving people's lives.

It is obvious that doctors never stop learning, even after finishing their formal education. Examining all patients carefully, practicing surgical techniques frequently, and watching patients closely help surgeons continue to learn and become successful.