Editing+the+Conclusion

In this activity, you will edit the conclusion of the essay. The sentences are not in the correct order. In your pairs, you will do the following:


 * Put the sentences in the correct, logical order.
 * As the last sentence, add some advice or opinion or recommendation.


 * __Pair 1:__**

In short, many people find themselves trying to cope with stressful situations that occur in everyday life. Although everyone is different and may try a unique way to relieve stress, many people find meditation to be an excellent technique. When you are stressed out and looking for a way to relax, try finding a comfortable place, clearing your mind with deep breathing, and concentrating on pleasant thoughts. It might just work, and might help you to relax and deal with stressful situation.

__**Pair 2:**__

Today, natural medicines continue to help fight age-old illnesses and diseases.In addition, they offer hope for developing cures for other illnesses such as cancer, heart disease and mental health problems.Some people hope that in the future, marine scientists will be able to find even more natural drugs through undersea research. Perhaps nature will be able to speak to those people who are listening and give them clues to more long-hidden mysteries found in plants, mysteries which could cures some serious diseases.

__**Pair 3:**__

Deforestation is a serious problem facing the world today, and it has already had negative effects on the Earth's environment.Loss of biodiversity, increasing erosion of the land, and changes in the water cycle are only three of its many effects. If we want to keep these and other effects to a minimum in the future, we must find a way to slow the rate of deforestation as soon as possible, or our planet will be in jeopardy for future generations.


 * __Pair 4:__**

Nonetheless, computers and the Internet seem to have provided a kind of crossroad for this industry because they offer artists more choices as to how to record and promote their work and make money. The music industry has been able to provide its products to consumers for many years. As a result, consumers also now have more choices and can buy music in their own preferred way, instead of spending money in song they do not like.